The Terror of Possession

One of the historical ideas of a vampire is that they’re a demon-possessed corpse. For a horror writer, this can generate some truly frightening scenarios. Imagine seeing a loved one you thought dead, back from the grave. Then imagine what happens when you realize that loved one no longer recognizes you and has even become a savage monster.

Hungur - May 2008

I actually took this idea and gave it a little twist for a story that was published in Hungur Magazine a few years ago called “Jiang Shi.” Instead of a demon, an alien comes to Earth, kills a woman, then uses her like a puppet to try to communicate with humans to disastrous effect.

Although this scenario is frightening for those surrounding the dead person, the one possessed is typically beyond caring. To me, what would be even more frightening is to have a being controlling you while you’re conscious of its manipulation.

Owl Dance

Now that Dragon’s Fall is out, I’m returning to work on my Clockwork Legion steampunk series. In the first book, Owl Dance, I return to the idea of an alien coming to Earth but instead of destroying its host, it attempts to form something of a symbiotic bond. It drives the first person it encounters mad because of what’s happening.

The Scarlet Order vampires are not possessed, but rather they are humans who have been transformed somehow into a new type of creature. The horror for them comes from the fact that they can’t always control their impulses to hunt or even kill.

So, how do you like your vampires? Are they best as demon-possessed fiends? Tragic figures who can’t prevent their own actions? Or simply possessed of their own appetites?

Dragons Fall

Before I wrap up this week’s post, if you’re on Goodreads, be sure to sign up for the Dragon’s Fall: Rise of the Scarlet Order giveaway. One lucky person will get a signed copy of the novel. The giveaway is at: http://www.goodreads.com/giveaway/show/50183-dragon-s-fall-rise-of-the-scarlet-order

If you can’t wait for the giveaway to end, you can always drop over to Amazon for the Kindle Edition or Barnes and Noble for the Nook Edition.

Traveling in Style

Next weekend, I’m honored to be a guest at Her Royal Majesty’s Steampunk Symposium. You can read all about the convention at hrmsteam.com. The Symposium is being held aboard the Queen Mary, which is permanently docked in Long Beach, California. The Queen Mary began service in 1936 and had a long and distinguished career up until 1966.

Queen Mary

One of the things I love about visiting the Queen Mary is that it provides a window into what traveling from Europe to North America was like in the 1930s and 1940s. You can spend nights in the staterooms, dine in the restaurants and visit the control areas and engine room. I also find it interesting that the Queen Mary’s early years of service overlapped with the last years of the great airships. I’ve always had a fascination with the Hindenburg and the Graf Zeppelin and would love to travel on an airship.

Last year Hungur magazine ran a story about Desmond Drake (also known as Desmond Lord Draco), traveling aboard the Hindenburg during it’s fateful final voyage in 1937. Here’s a snippet.


After passing a few hours in the ship’s bow, Drake decided it was late enough that he could venture toward the passenger area. He stepped down the stairs that led from the bow to the lower catwalk. Moving past the officer’s cabins and the radio room, he came to the passenger cabins. Climbing up a set of stairs, and turning off the main corridor, he came to the cabin of an air ministry colonel named Erdmann. Drake didn’t mind taking blood from loyal Nazis.

Just as he reached down to grab the handle, an eerie green glow began pulsating along the doorframe.

A rustling and chattering started within the rooms. Drake melted into the shadows as people emerged from their cabins and drifted toward the passenger lounge on the ship’s starboard side. Stealthily, Drake followed, keeping to the shadows, which proved difficult with the eerie green light pulsating along all the metal support structures.

As Drake reached the lounge, the green glow began to fade. Near the entrance to the luxurious room, Captain Ernst Lehman held up his hands. Lehman wasn’t in command of the ship, but he was aboard as director of the Zeppelin Company. “The light is perfectly ordinary, nothing to worry about,” he said. “It’s just St. Elmo’s Fire. We see it much of the time when we pass near storms. It’s just the result of charge building up on our hull. As you can see it’s already dissipating.”

The passengers murmured and nodded, then most shuffled back to their cabins. Some moved toward the bar, instead. Drake presumed they were looking for something to drink, to help settle their nerves. He decided it would be a while longer before things settled down enough for him to feed.

Emerging from the shadows, he pretended to be a bleary-eyed passenger. He stepped over to the large promenade windows. Looking outside, he saw that the storm was dissipating. Icebergs drifted on the water below. Turning around, he admired the simple, clean décor of the lounge. A world map adorned one wall. Aside from that, the walls were white. Aluminum-framed, brown-upholstered chairs sat at tidy little tables. The ancient vampire felt as though he was looking at the world of the future, and he liked what he saw.


If you enjoyed this excerpt and would like to read the rest of the story, it’s in the autumn 2011 issue of Hungur Magazine. There’s also an exclusive interview with me in the issue. Of course you can find more of Desmond Drake’s adventures in my novels Dragon’s Fall and Vampires of the Scarlet Order. Clicking on the covers below will take you to places where you may purchase the books.

Hungur, Issue 13

Frankenstein Revisited

While working on a new story a couple of weeks ago, I decided to go back and reread Mary Shelley’s novel Frankenstein. I was particularly interested in revisiting Victor Frankenstein’s motivations in the novel and descriptions of his laboratory and working conditions. It’s been nearly 20 years since I last read Frankenstein and it was fascinating to take a fresh look at this novel that has had such a strong influence on both science fiction and horror.

The photo shows my cherished copy of Frankenstein illustrated by Berni Wrightson, introduced by Stephen King, and published by Marvel Comics. It’s a beautiful edition and reprints are widely available. For my reread, I downloaded a copy from Project Gutenberg, so I could more easily carry it around on my Kindle. Here is their page for Frankenstein: http://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/84

The plot of the novel has often been obscured by the famous Hollywood adaptations, so a brief, hopefully spoiler-free synopsis is worthwhile. The novel opens as Captain Robert Walton is leading an expedition to the North Pole. They see a mysterious figure traverse the ice on a dog sled. Some time later, the ice breaks up and they find another man on a dog sled barely alive, floating on the ice. They pull the man aboard and discover he’s Victor Frankenstein, a scientist from Geneva, Switzerland. Frankenstein proceeds to tell Walton how he came to be at the North Pole.

Frankenstein was a happy youth, surrounded by friends, including his adopted cousin Elizabeth Lavenza and their friend Henry Clerval. He reads extensively and discovers books about alchemy in his father’s library. Once he reaches his teens, Frankenstein goes to university at Ingolstadt where he learns about then-modern science. He gets the idea to combine his knowledge of alchemy with modern natural philosophy concerning chemistry and electricity to create life. He creates a body from cadavers and soon succeeds with his plans. However, he is so horrified by his creation that he turns from it and it runs off into the night.

Frankenstein goes on about his life for about two years, then is called home when his little brother is found murdered and the prime suspect is the family’s beloved housekeeper Justine. There is a trial and Justine is condemned to death. Soon after the trial, Frankenstein is hiking among the glaciers and is reunited with the monster, who tells him what he’s been doing for the past two years.

The monster went to a village and quickly found himself shunned. He hides near a small cottage and observes the DeLacy family. Observing them over the course of a year, he learns to speak, read and write. However, when he finally decides to make himself known to them, he is chased away. Some time later, he rescues a little girl from a stream, only be shunned and chased away by her father. All of this causes the creature to seek revenge on the man who created him.

The novel had much more impact on me now than it did twenty years ago. Some of that is simply that I’ve read more widely and understood more of the references. Some of it has to do with the fact that I’m now a parent. In many ways, the novel stands as a critique of people who create a child, then abandon it to their own self-interest. The creature is intelligent, but he doesn’t know love and he doesn’t learn to govern his violent emotions.

Frankenstein’s motivations were fascinating. His childhood interest in alchemy is scorned by one professor, while somewhat indulged by another. Together, this leads to Victor finding a way to merge the ancient arts with modern science. After he creates life, and the creature has gone out into the world, it’s interesting to see the way that the society of Frankenstein’s day allowed him to avoid responsibility for his creation until it was too late. There may have been no TV, computers, or video games, but Frankenstein found plenty to occupy himself with for large periods of time between encounters with the creature.

The creature himself appears doomed to his fate by his horrific appearance, but I find myself wondering if he would have turned into the “vile daemon” of the novel if he had been nurtured by a loving father rather than scorned as an unwanted child.

The experiments themselves were also interesting. Shelley avoids detailed description of the apparatus. It’s clear chemistry and cadavers are involved. Likewise, it’s implied that electricity is used, but she doesn’t explain in detail. What I found particularly interesting is that Frankenstein creates life not in a remote castle as depicted in the movies, but first in his apartment in Ingolstadt, then later attempts to recreate his experiment in a two-room thatch hovel in the Orkneys.

Perhaps more interesting than the experiments from a writer’s perspective were the descriptions of travel and how long it took to get from one place to another and how readily this time was accepted by people. There are some good tidbits here for writers who want to explore historical fiction.

Although the novel is often cited as discussing the problems of science gone wrong, the line that sticks with me most from was spoken by the creature to Victor: “You are my creator, but I am your master; obey!” To my mind, that’s the line that brings the novel home to everyone. How many of us have, at one time or another turned away from our parents or even God—no matter our specific religious beliefs—and made just that demand?

If you only know Frankenstein from the movies, you should definitely go check out the novel. If it has been some time since you’ve read the novel, I think it’s one worthy of a second look. I definitely enjoyed rediscovering this classic novel.